Your stranded on an island and it makes you frustrated because you can't seem to find any food . There's nobody else but you and this voice you keep hearing. it says it can help you but you say it's lying and you don't believe it. You turn around and you're knocked unconscious by a palm tree.The next morning you feel a pain on your stomach . You see a coconut on your stomach. You pick it up and you see a stick. You remember a documentary you watched once. It was about samoa and on how they survive the jungle. and what they eat and how they use stick's to crack open coconut's. come back next week for part #2
That's a great start to a great story Bradon. I like how you brought things you learned about Samoa from Chief Sialou:)
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Fantastic Bradon..
ReplyDeletei wanna know more!!!
(i may have to come over and get a sneak peak on next weeks continuing story - hehe)
awesome work!!
later,,
this is the longest week ever!!
ReplyDeletecan you please finish the story.. smile.